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  ThePathfinderandTheDeerslayerstandattheheadofCooper’snovelsasartisticcreations。Thereareothersofhisworkswhichcontainpartsasperfectasaretobefoundinthese,andscenesevenmorethrilling。Notonecanbecomparedwitheitherofthemasafinishedwhole。

  Thedefectsinbothofthesetalesarecomparativelyslight。

  Theywerepureworksofart。——Prof。Lounsbury。

  Thefivetalesrevealanextraordinaryfulnessofinvention……Oneoftheverygreatestcharactersinfiction,NattyBumppo

  Thecraftofthewoodsman,thetricksofthetrapper,allthedelicateartoftheforest,werefamiliartoCooperfromhisyouthup。——Prof。BranderMatthews。

  CooperisthegreatestartistinthedomainofromanticfictionyetproducedbyAmerica。——WilkieCollins。

  ItseemstomethatitwasfarfromrightfortheProfessorofEnglishLiteratureinYale,theProfessorofEnglishLiteratureinColumbia,andWilkieColliestodeliveropinionsonCooper’sliteraturewithouthavingreadsomeofit。ItwouldhavebeenmuchmoredecoroustokeepsilentandletpersonstalkwhohavereadCooper。

  Cooper’sarthassomedefects。Inoneplacein’Deerslayer,’andintherestrictedspaceoftwo—thirdsofapage,Cooperhasscored114offencesagainstliteraryartoutofapossible115。Itbreakstherecord。

  Therearenineteenrulesgoverningliteraryartinthedomainofromanticfiction——somesaytwenty—two。InDeerslayerCooperviolatedeighteenofthem。Theseeighteenrequire:

  1。Thatataleshallaccomplishsomethingandarrivesomewhere。ButtheDeerslayertaleaccomplishesnothingandarrivesintheair。

  2。Theyrequirethattheepisodesofataleshallbenecessarypartsofthetale,andshallhelptodevelopit。ButastheDeerslayertaleisnotatale,andaccomplishesnothingandarrivesnowhere,theepisodeshavenorightfulplaceinthework,sincetherewasnothingforthemtodevelop。

  3。Theyrequirethatthepersonagesinataleshallbealive,exceptinthecaseofcorpses,andthatalwaysthereadershallbeabletotellthecorpsesfromtheothers。ButthisdetailhasoftenbeenoverlookedintheDeerslayertale。

  4。Theyrequirethatthepersonagesinatale,bothdeadandalive,shallexhibitasufficientexcuseforbeingthere。ButthisdetailalsohasbeenoverlookedintheDeerslayertale。

  5。Theyrequirethatwhenthepersonagesofataledealinconversation,thetalkshallsoundlikehumantalk,andbetalksuchashumanbeingswouldbelikelytotalkinthegivencircumstances,andhaveadiscoverablemeaning,alsoadiscoverablepurpose,andashowofrelevancy,andremainintheneighborhoodofthesubjectinhand,andbeinterestingtothereader,andhelpoutthetale,andstopwhenthepeoplecannotthinkofanythingmoretosay。ButthisrequirementhasbeenignoredfromthebeginningoftheDeerslayertaletotheendofit。

  6。Theyrequirethatwhentheauthordescribesthecharacterofapersonageinhistale,theconductandconversationofthatpersonageshalljustifysaiddescription。ButthislawgetslittleornoattentionintheDeerslayertale,asNattyBumppo’scasewillamplyprove。

  7。Theyrequirethatwhenapersonagetalkslikeanillustrated,gilt—

  edged,tree—calf,hand—tooled,seven—dollarFriendship’sOfferinginthebeginningofaparagraph,heshallnottalklikeanegrominstrelintheendofit。ButthisruleisflungdownanddanceduponintheDeerslayertale。

  8。Theyrequirethatcrassstupiditiesshallnotbeplayeduponthereaderas\"thecraftofthewoodsman,thedelicateartoftheforest,\"byeithertheauthororthepeopleinthetale。ButthisruleispersistentlyviolatedintheDeerslayertale。

  9。Theyrequirethatthepersonagesofataleshallconfinethemselvestopossibilitiesandletmiraclesalone;or,iftheyventureamiracle,theauthormustsoplausiblysetitforthastomakeitlookpossibleandreasonable。ButtheserulesarenotrespectedintheDeerslayertale。

  10。Theyrequirethattheauthorshallmakethereaderfeeladeepinterestinthepersonagesofhistaleandintheirfate;andthatheshallmakethereaderlovethegoodpeopleinthetaleandhatethebadones。ButthereaderoftheDeerslayertaledislikesthegoodpeopleinit,isindifferenttotheothers,andwishestheywouldallgetdrownedtogether。

  11。Theyrequirethatthecharactersinataleshallbesoclearlydefinedthatthereadercantellbeforehandwhateachwilldoinagivenemergency。ButintheDeerslayertalethisruleisvacated。

  Inadditiontotheselargerulestherearesomelittleones。Theserequirethattheauthorshall:

  12。Saywhatheisproposingtosay,notmerelycomenearit。

  13。Usetherightword,notitssecondcousin。

  14。Eschewsurplusage。

  15。Notomitnecessarydetails。

  16。Avoidslovenlinessofform。

  17。Usegoodgrammar。

  18。Employasimpleandstraightforwardstyle。

  EventhesesevenarecoldlyandpersistentlyviolatedintheDeerslayertale。

  Cooper’sgiftinthewayofinventionwasnotarichendowment;butsuchasitwashelikedtoworkit,hewaspleasedwiththeeffects,andindeedhedidsomequitesweetthingswithit。Inhislittleboxofstagepropertieshekeptsixoreightcunningdevices,tricks,artificesforhissavagesandwoodsmentodeceiveandcircumventeachotherwith,andhewasneversohappyaswhenhewasworkingtheseinnocentthingsandseeingthemgo。Afavoriteonewastomakeamoccasinedpersontreadinthetracksofthemoccasinedenemy,andthushidehisowntrail。

  Cooperworeoutbarrelsandbarrelsofmoccasinsinworkingthattrick。

  Anotherstage—propertythathepulledoutofhisboxprettyfrequentlywashisbrokentwig。Heprizedhisbrokentwigabovealltherestofhiseffects,andworkeditthehardest。Itisarestfulchapterinanybookofhiswhensomebodydoesn’tsteponadrytwigandalarmalltheredsandwhitesfortwohundredyardsaround。EverytimeaCooperpersonisinperil,andabsolutesilenceisworthfourdollarsaminute,heissuretosteponadrytwig。Theremaybeahundredhandierthingstostepon,butthatwouldn’tsatisfyCooper。Cooperrequireshimtoturnoutandfindadrytwig;andifhecan’tdoit,goandborrowone。Infact,theLeatherStockingSeriesoughttohavebeencalledtheBrokenTwigSeries。

  Iamsorrythereisnotroomtoputinafewdozeninstancesofthedelicateartoftheforest,aspractisedbyNattyBumppoandsomeoftheotherCooperianexperts。Perhapswemayventuretwoorthreesamples。

  Cooperwasasailor——anavalofficer;yethegravelytellsushowavessel,drivingtowardsaleeshoreinagale,issteeredforaparticularspotbyherskipperbecauseheknowsofanundertowtherewhichwillholdherbackagainstthegaleandsaveher。Forjustpurewoodcraft,orsailorcraft,orwhateveritis,isn’tthatneat?ForseveralyearsCooperwasdailyinthesocietyofartillery,andheoughttohavenoticedthatwhenacannon—ballstrikesthegrounditeitherburiesitselforskipsahundredfeetorso;skipsagainahundredfeetorso——andsoon,tillfinallyitgetstiredandrolls。Nowinoneplacehelosessome\"females\"——ashealwayscallswomen——intheedgeofawoodnearaplainatnightinafog,onpurposetogiveBumppoachancetoshowoffthedelicateartoftheforestbeforethereader。Thesemislaidpeoplearehuntingforafort。Theyhearacannonblast,andacannon—

  ballpresentlycomesrollingintothewoodandstopsattheirfeet。Tothefemalesthissuggestsnothing。ThecaseisverydifferentwiththeadmirableBumppo。IwishImayneverknowpeaceagainifhedoesn’tstrikeoutpromptlyandfollowthetrackofthatcannon—ballacrosstheplainthroughthedensefogandfindthefort。Isn’titadaisy?IfCooperhadanyrealknowledgeofNature’swaysofdoingthings,hehadamostdelicateartinconcealingthefact。Forinstance:oneofhisacuteIndianexperts,Chingachgook(pronouncedChicago,Ithink),haslostthetrailofapersonheistrackingthroughtheforest。Apparentlythattrailishopelesslylost。NeitheryounorIcouldeverhaveguessedoutthewaytofindit。ItwasverydifferentwithChicago。Chicagowasnotstumpedforlong。Heturnedarunningstreamoutofitscourse,andthere,intheslushinitsoldbed,werethatperson’smoccasin—tracks。

  Thecurrentdidnotwashthemaway,asitwouldhavedoneinallotherlikecases——no,eventheeternallawsofNaturehavetovacatewhenCooperwantstoputupadelicatejobofwoodcraftonthereader。

  WemustbealittlewarywhenBranderMatthewstellsusthatCooper’sbooks\"revealanextraordinaryfulnessofinvention。\"Asarule,IamquitewillingtoacceptBranderMatthews’sliteraryjudgmentsandapplaudhislucidandgracefulphrasingofthem;butthatparticularstatementneedstobetakenwithafewtonsofsalt。Blessyourheart,Cooperhadn’tanymoreinventionthanahorse;andIdon’tmeanahigh—classhorse,either;Imeanaclothes—horse。Itwouldbeverydifficulttofindareallyclever\"situation\"inCooper’sbooks,andstillmoredifficulttofindoneofanykindwhichhehasfailedtorenderabsurdbyhishandlingofit。Lookattheepisodesof\"thecaves\";andatthecelebratedscufflebetweenMaquaandthoseothersonthetable—landafewdayslater;andatHurryHarry’squeerwater—transitfromthecastletotheark;andatDeerslayer’shalf—hourwithhisfirstcorpse;andatthequarrelbetweenHurryHarryandDeerslayerlater;andat——butchooseforyourself;youcan’tgoamiss。

  IfCooperhadbeenanobserverhisinventivefacultywouldhaveworkedbetter;notmoreinterestingly,butmorerationally,moreplausibly。

  Cooper’sproudestcreationsinthewayof\"situations\"suffernoticeablyfromtheabsenceoftheobserver’sprotectinggift。Cooper’seyewassplendidlyinaccurate。Cooperseldomsawanythingcorrectly。Hesawnearlyallthingsasthroughaglasseye,darkly。Ofcourseamanwhocannotseethecommonestlittleevery—daymattersaccuratelyisworkingatadisadvantagewhenheisconstructinga\"situation。\"IntheDeerslayertaleCooperhasastreamwhichisfiftyfeetwidewhereitflowsoutofalake;itpresentlynarrowstotwentyasitmeandersalongfornogivenreason;andyetwhenastreamactslikethatitoughttoberequiredtoexplainitself。Fourteenpageslaterthewidthofthebrook’soutletfromthelakehassuddenlyshrunkthirtyfeet,andbecome\"thenarrowestpartofthestream。\"Thisshrinkageisnotaccountedfor。

  Thestreamhasbendsinit,asureindicationthatithasalluvialbanksandcutsthem;yetthesebendsareonlythirtyandfiftyfeetlong。IfCooperhadbeenaniceandpunctiliousobserverhewouldhavenoticedthatthebendswereoftenerninehundredfeetlongthanshortofit。

  Coopermadetheexitofthatstreamfiftyfeetwide,inthefirstplace,fornoparticularreason;inthesecondplace,henarrowedittolessthantwentytoaccommodatesomeIndians。Hebendsa\"sapling\"totheformofanarchoverthisnarrowpassage,andconcealssixIndiansinitsfoliage。Theyare\"laying\"forasettler’sscoworarkwhichiscomingupthestreamonitswaytothelake;itisbeinghauledagainstthestiffcurrentbyaropewhosestationaryendisanchoredinthelake;itsrateofprogresscannotbemorethanamileanhour。Cooperdescribestheark,butprettyobscurely。Inthematterofdimensions\"itwaslittlemorethanamoderncanal—boat。\"Letusguess,then,thatitwasaboutonehundredandfortyfeetlong。Itwasof\"greaterbreadththancommon。\"Letusguess,then,thatitwasaboutsixteenfeetwide。Thisleviathanhadbeenprowlingdownbendswhichwerebutathirdaslongasitself,andscrapingbetweenbankswhereithadonlytwofeetofspacetospareoneachside。Wecannottoomuchadmirethismiracle。Alow—

  roofedlogdwellingoccupies\"two—thirdsoftheark’slength\"——adwellingninetyfeetlongandsixteenfeetwide,letussayakindofvestibuletrain。Thedwellinghastworooms——eachforty—fivefeetlongandsixteenfeetwide,letusguess。OneofthemisthebedroomoftheHuttergirls,JudithandHetty;theotheristheparlorinthedaytime,atnightitispapa’sbedchamber。Thearkisarrivingatthestream’sexitnow,whosewidthhasbeenreducedtolessthantwentyfeettoaccommodatetheIndians——saytoeighteen。Thereisafoottospareoneachsideoftheboat。DidtheIndiansnoticethattherewasgoingtobeatightsqueezethere?Didtheynoticethattheycouldmakemoneybyclimbingdownoutofthatarchedsaplingandjuststeppingaboardwhenthearkscrapedby?

  No,otherIndianswouldhavenoticedthesethings,butCooper’sIndiansnevernoticeanything。Cooperthinkstheyaremarvelouscreaturesfornoticing,buthewasalmostalwaysinerrorabouthisIndians。Therewasseldomasaneoneamongthem。

  Thearkisonehundredandfortyfeetlong;thedwellingisninetyfeetlong。TheideaoftheIndiansistodropsoftlyandsecretlyfromthearchedsaplingtothedwellingasthearkcreepsalongunderitattherateofamileanhour,andbutcherthefamily。Itwilltakethearkaminuteandahalftopassunder。Itwilltaketheninetyfootdwellingaminutetopassunder。Now,then,whatdidthesixIndiansdo?Itwouldtakeyouthirtyyearstoguess,andeventhenyouwouldhavetogiveitup,Ibelieve。Therefore,IwilltellyouwhattheIndiansdid。Theirchief,apersonofquiteextraordinaryintellectforaCooperIndian,warilywatchedthecanal—boatasitsqueezedalongunderhim,andwhenhehadgothiscalculationsfineddowntoexactlytherightshade,ashejudged,heletgoanddropped。Andmissedthehouse!Thatisactuallywhathedid。Hemissedthehouse,andlandedinthesternofthescow。

  Itwasnotmuchofafall,yetitknockedhimsilly。Helaythereunconscious。Ifthehousehadbeenninety—sevenfeetlonghewouldhavemadethetrip。ThefaultwasCooper’s,nothis。Theerrorlayintheconstructionofthehouse。Cooperwasnoarchitect。

  TherestillremainedintheroostfiveIndians。

  Theboathaspassedunderandisnowoutoftheirreach。Letmeexplainwhatthefivedid——youwouldnotbeabletoreasonitoutforyourself。

  No。1jumpedfortheboat,butfellinthewaterasternofit。ThenNo。

  2jumpedfortheboat,butfellinthewaterstillfartherasternofit。

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