Mostpeoplewhosawtheperformanceof“Strafford“givenin1886,undertheauspicesoftheBrowningSociety,weresurprisedaswellasimpressed:forfew,apparently,hadrealisedfromperusalthepoweroftheplayasmademanifestwhenacted。Thesecretofthisisthatthedrama,whenprivilyread,seemshardifnotheavyinitsdiction,andtobesoinornate,thoughbynomeanscorrespondinglysimple,astorenderanycomparisonbetweenitandthedramaticworkofShakespeareoutofthequestion。Butwhenacted,theartistryoftheplayisrevealed。
Itsintensenaturalnessisdueingreatparttothesternconcisionofthelines,wherenowordiswasted,whereeverysentenceisfraughtwiththeutmostitcanconvey。Theoutlineswhichdisturbedusbytheirvaguenessbecomemoreclear:inaword,weallseeinenactmentwhatonlyafewofuscandiscerninperusal。Theplayhasitsfaults,butscarcelythoseoflanguage,wherethedictionisnobleandrhythmic,becauseitis,sotospeak,thegenuinerindofthefruititenvelops。
Buttherearedramaticfaultsprimarily,intheextremeeconomyoftheauthorinthepresentmentofhis`dramatispersonae’,whoareembodiedabstractionsmonomaniacsofideas,assomeonehassaidofHugo’spersonagesratherthanmenasweare,withmanifoldcomplexitiesinendlessfrictionorfusion。Onecardinalfaultisthelackofhumour,whichtomymindistheparamountobjectiontoitspopularacceptance。Another,isthemisproportionatelengthofsomeofthespeeches。Onceagain,thereis,asinthegreaterportionofBrowning’slongerpoemsanddramas,abanefulequalityofemphasis。
TheconceptionofCharlesI。isnotonlyobviouslyweak,butstrangelyprejudicedadverselyforsokeenananalystofthesoulasBrowning。
Forwhatafellow-dramatistcallsthis“SunsetShadowofaKing“,nomanorwomancouldabaseeveryhopeandenergy。ShakespearewouldneverhavecommittedthecrucialmistakeofmakingCharlesthedespicabledeformityheisinBrowning’sdrama。Straffordhimselfdisappearstoosoon: